I get to Priyanka's blog and come to know of this challenge which is going on at Andy's Blog.
Here are the rules-
A poem will be constructed by different bloggers. The prompt line will be given by Andy. All you have to do is add your line to the poem,based on the line above yours i.e. what the previous blogger has said. The line should be of 15 words or less. Check out the link to know more about the challenge.
So here it goes -
Title : (Yet to be determined)
Andy's Line(11 words) : A sleeping flower is more beautiful than a heart without love
Kriti's Line (14 words) : But I bleed enjoying your thorns of love, rest awhile so I may breathe
Punam's line (14 words) : The loss of your love O Heart! Put me to an eternal sleep
Rosette Princess' line (14 words) : And bury me somewhere , where my lover won't even find my grave to weep
Priyanka's Line (15 words) : And let me dream of a distant peace , that keeps swaying from me to him
My line (13 words) : Let this pain unbearable that dwells my heart vanish ; if only for sometime
Join the challenge and add your line !!!
Here are the rules-
A poem will be constructed by different bloggers. The prompt line will be given by Andy. All you have to do is add your line to the poem,based on the line above yours i.e. what the previous blogger has said. The line should be of 15 words or less. Check out the link to know more about the challenge.
So here it goes -
Title : (Yet to be determined)
Andy's Line(11 words) : A sleeping flower is more beautiful than a heart without love
Kriti's Line (14 words) : But I bleed enjoying your thorns of love, rest awhile so I may breathe
Punam's line (14 words) : The loss of your love O Heart! Put me to an eternal sleep
Rosette Princess' line (14 words) : And bury me somewhere , where my lover won't even find my grave to weep
Priyanka's Line (15 words) : And let me dream of a distant peace , that keeps swaying from me to him
My line (13 words) : Let this pain unbearable that dwells my heart vanish ; if only for sometime
Join the challenge and add your line !!!
Hi Swarnali...Our line overlaps...I was a bit behind in linking up...nice line and nice to share this platform. :)
ReplyDeletehaha...really...?? the same happened with the lines before mine. Gimme the link. would love to see yours. :D
DeleteLet love lost, be forgotten
ReplyDelete:)
Lovely!! :D Do a post and link it to the challenge page,please!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Swarnali.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Lovers' Cove! I really like your line and it's follows on nicely from Priyanka's. I'm really enjoying how everyone is working together. Great job! Do keep checking back & even clicking on the other links. That way we get to know each other. Once all 30 lines have been collected. I shall compile the final poem & then share it for everyone to read.
If you like Lovers' Cove, then you might also be interested in Blog Hop Saturday! over at my main blog on June 2nd. All you need do is linkup EITHER your blog OR a specific blog post OR your FB Fan Page (only one link per blogger is permitted at this time). To learn more, please click here...
Looking forward to reading more from you. Thanks for taking part in the Lovers' Cove Challenge!
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Thanks a bunch Andy :)
DeleteOff to join the hop :D
Hello again Swarnali.
DeleteThanks for your contribution. I'm following those that take part in the challenge. If you look closely, you'll see me waving back at you (LOL) See you soon!
Yeah I see you smiling on the followers list :D Thanks !!! Am waiting for the whole poem to be completed.
DeleteThis one looks cool...:-D
ReplyDeleteSo what are you waiting for?? Join in!!
DeleteLovely lines...!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you sweetheart. join in the challenge na!!
DeleteI am your 52nd follower. :) You have a lovely blog here. Life is full of dreams and drama indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteYou made my day too!! :D Yep...dreams are our perception and drama is what happens :D
DeleteAmazing... Seeking soothe from scars of love.. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you. i believe all of us have done it someday or the other,haven't we?
DeleteAbsolutely...... :-)
ReplyDeleteHeart so insecure and fed up with all the mess !
ReplyDeleteSearching peace just for a while !
Lovely!
:) ty
DeleteIf only!!!
ReplyDeleteIf only for some time... let the pain vanish.
:)
Isn't it human tendency to seek immediate relief, even if one knows that the same pain is gonna return again??
Loved ur line.
Yes you are right, we always run and desire an immediate relief for the pain even when we know it is not going to last.
DeleteThank you so much, means a lot to me :)
Dear Swarnali,
ReplyDeleteI'd like to say a big thank you for taking part in the Lovers' Cove Challenge.
I have posted the final poem...come see!
A Sleeping Flower...