Friday, November 9, 2012

Scribbles


ENMESHED

To be or not to be
To do or not to
Past and present intertwine
Into a grotesque mesh
Leaving me all confused and knotted.



JUST WISHES

Wishing forgetting you came easy,
Wishing just a goodbye would have done it all,
Wishing it was enough to erase all those memories,
Wishing just closing my eyes would end it all,
Wishing turning away would set me free,
From all those memories which look so distant
Now that you're not here anymore.





38 comments:

  1. Touching, deep and very poignant!

    Cannot say more - hugsss to you..take care

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    1. Thankew...you are always kind with the compliments :P *hugs u back*

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  2. time, they say, is the best healer....

    very well written!

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    1. Time may not be a medicine as the pain is never gone but it indeed is the best healer as it gives us the space to get used to living with the pain :)
      Thanks a lot :)

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  3. That feeling is the hardest. But once you're over it, Life feels new and different. Better nevertheless.

    +To Me It Matters+

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    1. Hehe yeah sometimes you just need a few bumps on the road to keep you from over speeding :P Life isn't that bad when you learn to appreciate every part of it, be it grief or joy :)
      Thanks :)

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  4. Beautifully written ... loved both the poems :-)

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  5. Wow, that was beautiful!! I loved 'Just Wishes', it really brings out a sense of loss and desperation - beautifully written, Swarnali!! I really feel like humming it, wish I could find a tune to go with it :-)

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    1. Thank you so much ,Fabida....I'm really glad you liked it :)
      Well, I wrote Just Wishes while humming to Need You Now by Lady Antebellum...maybe you can try singing along with it :P

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  6. losing someone is one of the hardest things ever. but they are right when they say that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. it's only when you close one chapter, that the next can start. cheers to a new beginning. :)

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    1. Hehehe...now somebody has been listening to Kelly Clarkson too much?? ;) Yeah cheers to the new beginning :D hugs tight

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  7. Lovely words Swarnali :)
    From being bonded to trying to escape the bonds, the moods expressed nicely.
    This post reminds me of one of my favorite songs 'Wish you were here' by Pink Floyd.

    Keep up the good writing Swarnali. :) :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thanks a bunch, Jay...means a lot to me :) Haven't heard that song...will listen to it asap...thanks for the suggestion...I was listening to Need You Now by Lady Antebellum when I wrote those lines :)

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  8. its touching and a tad sad too .. but we cant change the past.. its gone .. future we dont know .. the only day is TODAY.. the present ..

    wishing this happened or that , is ok, but it would be much more feasible is we actually do something about it :)


    Take care girl, have a great day and wish you and family a VERY very happy diwali

    Bikram's

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    1. Thanks a lot,Bikram...
      Well, I don't regret anything but at times you just wish things turned out better..no harm in wishing that,right?? ;)
      Those lines were written long back. I'm on better terms with life now :D
      A very happy Diwali to you too :)

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  9. i loved the enmeshed poem...lovely words..a hint of darkness..

    http://sushmita-smile.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thanks, Sushmita...am glad you liked it :)

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  10. Beautiful poetry. I especially enjoyed the second one.

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    1. Thank you, Cheryl...so glad you liked it :)

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  11. Oh, beautiful. Your feelings come across so vividly. Brilliant :) :D

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    1. Oh well as you know what happened to them at last :P But am so happy finally :P Thanks a bunch...your appreciations means a lot
      *hugs*

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  12. I really enjoyed both poems--the second one reminds me of my first love.

    Cheers, Jenn

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    1. Thank you so much, Jenn ...the second one was indeed written for mine :)

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  13. We're always interwined in the tales of past. It ain't easy to move past it.
    Worth reading. Amazing poems. :)

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    1. Hey Purple!!
      Thanks for dropping in :)
      Am glad you liked them.. :D
      Well, I believe the present and the past are always intertwined, you can segregate the two and even though you can say you've moved on forgotten the past...it is not true, you just decide to ignore it willingly :)

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  14. I love both - I really really like the first one too. I love them both equally!

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  15. Such a deep & thoughtful post!I wish all your wishes come true because wishing is one of the best things we humans can wish for :D Thanks a lot for sharing this with us. :) Hi-Fi :) Take care!

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    1. haha true that :D
      Thanks a bunch, Tanya :)

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  16. i really enjoyed readin this post. it was very deep and so beautiful :D
    xoxo <3

    http://littlemisssinner.blogspot.in/

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  17. That's a deep one....I can only say, have faith in your wishes, and one day a smiling rainbow will come through...
    Beautiful...I loved the first one more...:)))
    Lovely...

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    1. Thanks for the wishes, ma'am....let's hope the rainbow comes soon :)
      The first one was scribbled during one of my classes to keep myself from falling asleep :P
      Thanks again :)

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